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The fifth page of the new version of "Miss Doomsday". The page re-utilizes the last third of the previous version of page five (seen here: [link] ), mainly because I really liked how it turned out.

Next page: [link]
Previous page: [link]

EDIT (3/20/2011): I added some blacks and modified some of the drawings of Anne's mother, upon suggestion. :)
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:icontadpole7:
Strong page on all fronts.
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~lenadventures Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This page is better but I think the girl looks more unique and prettier with her old chin. :P
By the way the story's great! :O
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*cluedog Mar 1, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
I appreciate your critique on the comic. I find myself oscillating between the pages, myself.
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~thatkrazykiddd Nov 8, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
I love the detail on this one. And the checkered tiles. So pretty~!
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:iconl1701e:
Hmmm, usually in these kinda comics, if someone says they have visions, then they're not talking crazy. Also, based on the behaviors that Anna's mother showed in the previous page, it seemed to me she grew a little more lucid when she tried to warn Anna of the visions. Could it be that medication...is not medication at all?

I guess I'll just have to keep reading and find out.
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:iconfladam:
Superb stuff going on in this page. :)
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*cluedog Jun 28, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks! I love working on this comic, along with Opey.
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:iconfladam:
I've yet to check out your new stuff on Opey. Looking forward to it.
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Mood: Joy ~ArtistKev14 Apr 19, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like both versions but in this one there is more emotion expressed from the mother and in the eigth panel I just love the expression Anne and her mother are making. Also I like the final panels wi the dramatic build up. Very nice touch. Good job with this and keep up the good work.
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*cluedog Apr 20, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks! I was more pleased with this version, particularly with Anne's expressions. I agree that it seemed to have more emotion than the previous version.
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